יום חמישי, 23 בדצמבר 2010


Kiefer Sutherland is 56 years old, he is a Canadian actor, producer and director. Kiefer Sutherland Participant in the series 24, I know him from there and he's an excellent actor. He's the son of a Canadian actor, Donald Sutherland. Kiefer Sutherland is a very creative person, I learned a lot from him and I will learn more. When he was young his parents said "he would be a actor" and it's true.

Kiefer Sutherland was born in 1966 in Canada(My bad). He has black hair, brown eyes and he likes to go shopping. He gets angry easily, he's always happy.  His parents, Donald Sutherland and Shirley Sutherland, are successful Canadian actors. When he was young his parents knew he had to be a star. When he was young, his family moved to Corona, California, he loved the place and he didn't want to leave. Then, his parents divorced and he moved with his mother to Toronto. Since he was young he was advertised, he loved the T.V, that's why he became famous.

Kiefer Sutherland started to do films. The first film that he has made "Stand by Me", he played the neighbourhood bully. As of 2008, he started to do more films. He was very talented and creative. He has starred in Japanese commercials for Calorie Mate, performing a parody of his Jack Bauer(24) character. Kiefer Sutherland began to appear in ad campaigns and everyone loved him.

In conclusion, Kiefer Sutherland is talented, creative, and a great actor,in my opinion, Kiefer talented than anyone else.Kiefer is strong man, he knows how to play in movies and in series, Kiefer is a big star ever.







יום רביעי, 8 בדצמבר 2010

A movie review-Zombieland

Zombieland is a(ww. - an) action comedy movie. I watched the movie in my house with my friends. Zombieland is about 4 people,  together they try to find refuge against zombies. but the film's writers included  special things in the film, creating a different and better movie.

The movie takes place in Hollywood, California. the Main characters in this film are Columbus(Jesse Eisenberg), Wichita (Emma Stone), Little Rock(Abigail Breslin) and Tallahassee(Woody Harrelson).Columbus goes to see if his parents are still alive in Ohio, he start(gr.) the car and suddenly he discovers the engine (is) destroyed. (new sentence) then he seen(gr.) his friend Tallahasse(Woody Harrelson). They travel together and when they stop at a grocery store, they meet two sisters,  Wichita (Emma Stone) and Little Rock(Abigail Breslin). They seen(gr.) a truck with lots of weapons, but when the boys meet the girls again, the girls attempt once more to steal their truck.

Eventually, they driven(gr.) to Los Angeles"Pacific Playland" amusement park, rumored to be zombie-free. Columbus  like(gr.) the idea and wants to leave them, (New sentence) he decides to stay with the group, he has no where to go. Wichita and Little Rock goes(gr.) alone to the park beacuse Wichita begun(gr.) to develop feelings for Columbus. When the girls arrive at the park, they  (don't) see any zombies, so they turn on lights and zombies come. The sisters begun(gr.) to shout and then the boys heard(gr.) them, (New sentence) the boys wanted(gr.) to save the girls, Columbus Junction attracts the heart of the zombies Columbus then the girls ran away with Tallahassee. Columbus managed(gr.) to escape from the zombies and they all go to a safe place.
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In my opinion "Zombieland" is a great movie, I highly recommend to see this movie. This movie has lots of action, the actors playing(gr.) well, this movie shows everything about friends, shows us how to behave to friends. Anyone who sees this movie will enjoy,(New sentence) if I enjoyed this movie everyone can, it doesn't matter if you love comedy, you will love this movie.

This is better, but your main problems remains - grammar . I don't understand why you keep using the V3 form where it is not needed.
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Daphna