יום שני, 16 במאי 2011

Pupils do a lot of things in the afternoon, some pupils choose to volunteering and some others choose to hang out with friends. Pupils who choose to volunteering, join police, or MDA, help sick kids/people. I think volunteering is the best of both because you need sometimes to help to people. I prefer to volunteer.
  
Volunteering makes me happy, I love to do that, to help people.I'm volunteering in the police, I love it because sometimes i'm participants in ceremonies and help people who need my help. .If no one will volunteer(why "will volunteer" isn't good?), the people who need help will be difficult for them to do things, sometimes people will die.Therefore, volunteering is a good thing and very important in our lives

In additon, there are many volunteer help pupils with homework, make people happy, and play with them. The pupils have a lot of time after school, so, they can volunteer instead on the computer or watch T.V.Additionally, volunteering gives a sense of something good, that you are doing something important.

In conclusion, everyone should volunteer, it makes you happy, it gives you great feeling. You can save people, help pupils with homework, it shows you care about people, you are interested in human lives and helping others.





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